A for effort! It could use some work though
I'm not a big fan of ambiance, but in this case you made it work well toward the feeling of the song. However, the drums could be a little more powerful and more diverse, if you see what I'm saying. When the flute (at least, that's what I think it is) comes in the whole song just comes together. Also, you may want to think the equalization of this song, it can get a little distorted in some areas. I'm picking up distortion on studio-quality headphones, so I do not believe the problem is on my end. If you have AIM, IM me at will12hertz (thats will 12 hertz as one word). If you used FL Studio to compose this work, then I'd like to take a look at the .flp file if you still have it.